Talk:Week 3 Writing Annoyances/@comment-209.242.165.22-20200227061551

Annoyance – using too many quotations in a row

Example:

Research shows that dogs can help with depression. According to Greer Greenley, “Dogs can contribute to your happiness. Studies show that dogs reduce stress, anxiety and depression, ease loneliness, encourage exercise and improve your all-around health.” (Greenley, 2019) Ana Sandoui states, “that having a pet offers people a deep sense of “ontological security” — that is, the feeling of stability, continuity, and meaning in one’s life.” (Sandoui,2018)

Fix:

Research shows that dogs can help with depression. According to Greer Greenley, “Dogs can contribute to your happiness. Studies show that dogs reduce stress, anxiety and depression, ease loneliness, encourage exercise and improve your all-around health.” (Greenley, 2019) Other studies concluded that owning a pet can help with depression by providing a feeling of stability. In a separate article, Ana Sanoui states, “that having a pet offers people a deep sense of “ontological security” — that is, the feeling of stability, continuity, and meaning in one’s life.” (Sandoui,2018)

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